Zeldiah: Time of War Game type Computer Rpg(role playing game)/action Story A planet named zeldiah, which means planet of now, is at a crisis against to species named Pallidins and Cozmos. For a long time these planets have been mortal enemies. They are at war because the cosmos also known as the warlords are trying to dominate all living things there, but the Pallidins are the peacemakers. But they no choice but to fight back to protect them from the evil the cozmos will do to them. Lucky, the pallidins find an alley named humans. The humans landed there because it became too deadly to live on earth, so they had to leave with multiple spacecrafts trying to find new place to call home. But unfortunately some of the ships got lost and separated and landed on the planet zeldiah. So the paladins promised to help them find the separated groups if they helped them fight in the war. Humans Background: the human species have lived on earth many centuries, but the liking conditions became to dyer to live on from the heat form global warming and much other pollution. So they developed an idea to search for new life. So they created many spacecrafts to carry the people. Ad they departed earth and went to search for new life. Many years pass and many of the ships get lost from disagreement and encountering obstacles on the way. So one group of humans on a spacecraft called berce. Finally they find a place to land called zeldiah. They land there and come to meet a alien life called Pallidins. They quickly make friends with them and learn there ways of life and how to live on this new planet. Pallidins then tell about a conflict between them and the cosmos. They tell them how they are mad with power and killed many hopeless aliens. And How they where smart to stay away from them. But they new it wasn’t long till they would find them. So they had to fight back or there whole life would be destroyed. So the pallidins made a deal with the humans if they helped them fight the cosmos and win; they would help them find there separated groups. Setting: a space center and outside planet Special: high tech Weapons: laser swords, variety of laser guns, arm attachments (come with guns, swords, and more) Vehicles: motorcycles and cars Pets: outside aliens Armor: futuristic looking knight suits, clothing, and high tech protection Physical features: do I really have to answer that Cozoms Background: The whole cozmos life style has been cruel and unjust one. They are known as the warlords since they are always mad with power and ruled by a dictator named Verda. He has commanded the cozmos To capture all living species and if they resist kill them. They have ruled and wiped out about all of the living species, but one named the palldins. They lost track of them for a while, but finally found where they lived but they where. They planning war on the pallidins and their new alleys named humans. Setting: big kingdom; empire and outside land Special: strength Weapons: giant swords, axes, spears, and other metal weapons Vehicles: aliens Pets: aliens Armor: old knight armor Physical traits: big; strong, no eyes, two arms and legs, three fingers and toes, and big mouth with a bunch of sharp teeth Pallidins Background: palldins are known for there spirt and magic powers they have. They have the ability to talk to any species, heal, resurrect any species, and more. But all of this was disturbed by a species called cozmos. This deadly kind has destroyed all of there alleys and friend of different species. But they have been smart to stay away from the cozmos, but I wasn’t to long in till they found them. So they are forced to fight back and declare war. They have also met a new alley named humans. They said they where a gift from pozo, their god. They soon make friends with them and hear that they need help finding there separated groups when they had to leave there home land named earth. They said they would help them if they helped them in the fight against the cozmos. They hope to defeat them and find a more peaceful place. Setting: huts/tents and outside land Special: magic Weapons: spells Vehicles: wings Pets: aliens Armor: sprit metal armor and clothing Physical traits: tall, skinny, symbol on, two arms, two legs, four fingers, 5 toes Point of game Level up, get new gear, create and live new character, and fight in war

Still working on idea what you think?

Well there's some grammar problems. That's significant because you're writing for games. Clarity is key in relaying your ideas.

Also, how does this differ from any other RPG/RTS game? Sounds very "meh".

Quote: Original post by Alpha_ProgDes
Well there's some grammar problems. That's significant because you're writing for games. Clarity is key in relaying your ideas.

Also, how does this differ from any other RPG/RTS game? Sounds very "meh".

So you dont thinks its a good idea

Quote: Original post by Alpha_ProgDes
Well there's some grammar problems. That's significant because you're writing for games. Clarity is key in relaying your ideas.

Also, how does this differ from any other RPG/RTS game? Sounds very "meh".

Alos trying to get this RPG game like a first person shooter

this is a scratch of my idea probally will make changes just want to know if story is good!

how do you put pictures on a post

Quote: Original post by Gamer11
how do you put pictures on a post

Only the mighty FAQ knows.

This is a scetch of one of the enemies

Quote: Original post by Gamer11
This is a scetch of one of the enemies

1. Fixed.
2. You might want to flesh your idea some more.
3. Afterwards, you might wanted an artist.