Greetings denizens of Gamedev.net! This is my first posting here, so i'm just going to jump right into it. Basically, I'm having terrible problems with writer's block when it comes to describing the business district of the primary city in a game I've finally gotten around to putting on paper. Basically I'm trying to describe the culture, appearance and atmosphere of this area and constantly finding myself getting stuck with a complete mental blank. Whilst this could be worked around with some of the minor areas, being the main trade district in the main city, I feel I can't simply jump over it. Here's what I have so far, any pointers/tips would be quite welcome, as well as criticisms, and just a finishing note, this isn't meant to be the final draft, at this stage I'm only looking to get a good overview of the area so I can get some maps and conceptual drawings together and finally do a full write up. "The Business District is a large area that extends from the docks to slightly north of the monastery in a sort of keyhole shape. Whilst most of the trade district features almost immaculately kept buildings and roadways, things noticeably deteriorate as one approaches the Western Residences. The business district consists of wide streets and open plazas lined by rows of storefronts and the occasional street peddler. The storefronts are generally constructed of dark woods with brass highlights, so as not to distract from any window displays. The streets and plazas also prominently feature cypress-like trees, some left to grow naturally, others exquisitely shaped into sculptures or hedges. Grand marble fountains dominate many of the district’s plazas, each one drawing its water from the many aqueducts that snake into the heart of the city from the mountains. During the day, vast crowds form throughout the area, these are interspersed by the odd police officers who manage to keep some order amongst the masses. It is rare to find anyone from the western areas far from their homes, as such the general population of the district is made up of various tourists, merchants and the middle classes." I just feel this is lacking in areas but can't quite put my finger on it, not to mention all the other areas I've covered so far, minor or major, are 3-4 times longer than this. Thanks in advance! Fiachna

Thanks for the reply, after reading the suggestions you give I realised just how much I left out! I'll see how I go with writing it all down.

Why not go down town in the real world business district and see what you can see, hear, smell , taste, and touch. Jot these senses down and see what you can come up with? Just a thought.