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Game pitch - help needed

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2 comments, last by Orymus3 5 years, 10 months ago

Hi.

I am quite new to this great forum. Could you help me with a game pitch? English is not my native language so I am sure what I have written is less than perfect.

If anyone could spend some time reading and eventually correcting language and/or stylistic mistakes please take a look here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Gjqzz5SpzicCxpURLgz97KtO_3ATBFeTmEDytU3I3Do/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks a lot.

Mariusz

Ingraw Games

Mariusz

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Mariusz, your pitch doesn't say anything about the team. You're pitching not just a game but also the team that will make it. 

-- Tom Sloper -- sloperama.com

I would also recommend you take a look at more examples of decks and how they're made. There is no need to copy their template, but it might show you what's missing here.

 

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